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SO DA FOUNTAIN Odyssey archive · est. 2026
0701 10 Dec 2011 24 min

Unbecoming Jay

When a scheming Jay pawns off his visiting cousin on an unsuspecting friend, an unlikely friendship blooms - and Jay can't leave well enough alone.
Jay would rather do anything than spend the day with his visiting cousin Cindy - he's already put crickets in her sleeping bag - so he tricks Barrett into showing her around instead. To everyone's surprise, the two strangers hit it off, bonding over jazz, a school musical, and coloring the children's menus at Hal's Diner. But Jay can't believe the friendship is real, so he stirs up trouble... telling Priscilla that Barrett has found a new favorite girl, and making Cindy think Barrett was paid to spend the day with her. Suddenly Barrett has two hurt friends and a tangled mess he never made. With a little encouragement from Whit, he tells both girls the truth, and the friendships come out stronger than before. As for Jay, his scheme collapses when Cindy reveals she knows all about his action figures, matching pajamas, and Elvis jumpsuits - and the schemer finally meets his match.
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Jay has been ordered to show his visiting cousin Cindy around Odyssey, but he wants to escape her company after putting crickets in her sleeping bag. He persuades Barrett to keep her company instead, pretending he will cancel a debt even though the dollar in question is money Jay borrowed from Barrett. Then he slips away and leaves the two awkward strangers together at Whit's End.

Barrett finds Cindy quiet and difficult at first, but honest conversation reveals that they both love jazz and play instruments. He invites her to a school musical and takes her to Hal's Diner. When Cindy admits that she still colors children's menus because it reminds her of her father, who died when she was young, Barrett joins her rather than make fun of her. Their day becomes an unexpectedly happy one.

Jay cannot believe Cindy and Barrett genuinely enjoy each other's company. Convinced that Barrett must be plotting some kind of revenge, he decides to create trouble first. He tells Priscilla how impressed Barrett is with Cindy and emphasizes that the two are attending the musical alone. Priscilla grows jealous, especially because Barrett had shown little interest in attending with her.

Jay then arranges for both girls to bring Barrett breakfast at the same time. His hints make Priscilla think Barrett has replaced her, while his badly timed repayment makes Cindy believe Barrett accepted money to spend the day with her. Both girls leave hurt, and Barrett is left to untangle a misunderstanding he did not create.

Whit assures Barrett that welcoming a lonely visitor was thoughtful and right. A good deed can expose other people's fears or be misinterpreted, but that does not make the deed a mistake. Priscilla fears losing an important friendship, and Cindy fears she is too difficult to like. Barrett must keep doing what is right and speak honestly to both of them.

Barrett explains to Cindy that Jay did not pay him and gives her a coloring book as a reminder of their day. When Jay summons Priscilla to witness the meeting, Barrett recognizes his manipulation and brings everyone together. He tells Priscilla that she matters to him, and Cindy confirms that Barrett spoke warmly about her throughout their outing. The girls start over on friendly terms.

Jay tries one last time to embarrass Barrett over the coloring book, but Cindy reveals that she knows about Jay's own collections of action figures, matching pajamas, and Elvis jumpsuits. Faced with someone who can outmaneuver him, Jay retreats. His scheme has failed, while Barrett's kindness leaves him with two friendships strengthened by the truth.